Wednesday, April 29, 2009

The Loner's Anthem

I am standing alone,
People moving by my side.
I am standing alone,
As you gone walking by my side.

I am thinking alone,
People dreaming by my side,
I am thinking alone,
As you've lost  feeling by my side

I am walking alone,
Poeple talking by my side.
I am walking alone,
As you gone laughing by my side,

You came as a shimmering hope,
rekindling in me the light of love.
but I am now alone
as you're long left by my side.

I wanna die alone,
People hating me by my side.
I wanna die alone, 
As my love's crying by my side
                                 
                                                         - Sourish Karmakar


This is a new song, I wrote in moments of my loneliness.. I hope this time I come up with a tune soon...
Love u all.....
 BTW
This a loner's anthem ....dedicated to all the lonely people in the planet.... I hope u get comfort and love soon... and do pray the same for me...... God Bless you

14 comments:

  1. u know wat i going to write a single guys anthem :P...

    man that was some awesome poem..and now i am going to print it out for my desk :D....lovely...and ur not lonely :P..i am here to kick ur ass :P..but we both are still singles :)..

    urs..hemu.

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  2. awsome job dere. An amazing piece, and i waiting to listen to full thing with music n stuff. When is this happening anyways??

    I pray for you to lose you singlehood sooner. ;) God bless

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  3. Can't wait for the music! Whoa.. didn't know you were a musician of sorts :D

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  4. Hemu...

    defn I will be waiting for the anthem..we will sing together ..and may be carve out a territory named single land with a loner state ...and capital as loner city :P

    and thanx for the words of appreciation :)

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  5. Nidhi :D

    thanx frnd..but music and stuff nhi sirf guitar k sath and I am a terrible musician...but I hope I will find some tune soon..rite now my mind is too preoccupied...

    this singlehoood is killing me :D

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  6. Dhanya :P

    sorry but u have to wait ...I m not a kickass musician :P ..I just play with chords..I hope I find some for it :D

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  7. OOOHHHH...that hurts....!!

    Nice work, loneliness is a myth...dude. If your living it, probably it will only make you stronger.

    And don't forget, true love lasts a life time...your love has not left..the person might have..

    p.s: please allow http. url based comment posting. Its allowing me only to use google blogger

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  8. hey bro did u read my mind or what? cos this is exactly how Im feeling lately! WOW u said it really beautifully.

    ppl pass me by...laughing, walking, not caring, w.o. a word etc etc...I see them passing by. thats all. they just pass me by.

    whether we like it or not, we r all lone creatures...and yes we die alone too.

    *HUGZ*

    Keshi.

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  9. We come in this world alone and we go from this world alone. What happens in between is no different, but during that time we are prone to illusions!

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  10. Amol

    I agree with u on this point...and that's the reason of pain that love is still there..if it wud have gone with the peson then I wud have been happier :)

    u can use open ID ...
    it is also open....

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  11. sissy

    hhehehhe I guess brother and sister do have cosmic connection...

    but I don' wanna be alone when I am dying... :(

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  12. d 1st stanza n d last line just ripped my heart apart.

    n d pic is so appropriate. tree-stands alone while everything else move on.

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  13. ripped ur heart :O


    u ok na ????


    hehehhe
    thanx re.....tu na muft ki tarife karti hai :P

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